
7 Cover Letter Rules That Actually Get Interviews in 2025
It’s a classic hiring dilemma: to cover letter, or not to cover letter?
While some employers skip them entirely, a powerful cover letter can be your secret weapon. However, in today's landscape, most applications are lazy. Cover letters are being written by AI and filtered by AI, creating a sea of identical text.
We all know that networking is the ultimate job-search hack.
But when you do need to submit a letter, you need it to be exceptional.
Here are 7 ways to improve your cover letter and beat the bots.
- Sentence 1: The Company's Current Goal or Pain Point
- Sentence 2: Your Proof of Concept (The Result You Delivered)
Examples: Real-World Openers Getting Replies (Non-Tech Roles)
- Marketing: “Your team needs 3× pipeline from LinkedIn without 3× spend. I grew LinkedIn-sourced pipeline from $2.4M to $11M in 18 months at Lattice while keeping CPL under $180.”
- Sales: “You’re targeting $40M new ARR from enterprise this year. I closed $38M in new logos at Gong last year — 143% of quota.”
- Customer Success: “Hitting 125% NDR in this climate is brutal. I ran the book at Intercom that delivered 128% NDR by turning at-risk accounts into expansions.”
- Product Manager: “Your roadmap calls for cutting time-to-value from 45 to 14 days. I shipped the onboarding overhaul at Notion that lifted activation 41% in one quarter.”
- People Ops: “You need to hire 120 go-to-market roles in 2025. I built the sourcing engine at Ramp that delivered 104 accepted offers last year with <11% drop-off rate.”
- Finance: “You’re modeling for 35% gross margin by Q4. I led the pricing project at Brex that moved us from 28% to 37% in nine months.”
2. Beat ATS Without Stuffing
- Pull 8–12 exact phrases from the JD
- Use each once, naturally
- Arial/Calibri 10–12 pt, no tables, no fancy headers
3. Personalize the First 10 Words
Find the hiring manager and reference something real they posted or the company just announced.
Examples that work
- “Your LinkedIn post about pipeline velocity…”
- “Your Series C goal of tripling enterprise pipeline…”
Generic salutation = instant trash.
Recruiters spot AI letters in less than 8 seconds. Always rewrite every sentence in your own voice.
4. Use Hard Numbers on 2–3 Achievements
Make them feel pain if they pass on you.
Weak → Strong
“Grew pipeline” → “Grew marketing-sourced pipeline 360% YoY ($2.4M → $11M) while dropping CPL 22%”
5. Prove You Want THIS Company
One authentic sentence is mandatory in 2025.
Examples
- “Your remote-first culture is why I’ve thrived closing deals from four continents.”
- “Your mission to democratize financial access is exactly why I left banking.”
6. Close with a Specific Micro-CTA
Never end passively.
Do:
“I’d love 15 minutes next week to walk through how I can help you hit that $40M ARR target. Free Tue–Thu after 10am ET.”
Full 2025 Example — Enterprise Sales (329 words)
Sarah Chen
sarah.chen@email.com • linkedin.com/in/sarahchen • Chicago
November 30, 2025
Michael Torres
VP Sales
[Company]
Dear Michael,
Your post-Series D goal of $40M new enterprise ARR in 2025 is aggressive — I just closed $38M in new logos at Gong last year (143% of quota) by flipping the discovery process most AEs still do backwards.
At Gong I built and ran the entire enterprise motion from scratch: landed Salesforce, Adobe, and Databricks as logos, average deal size $1.8M, 94-day sales cycle (22% faster than company avg). Your focus on PLG-to-Enterprise handoff is exactly the playbook I perfected there.
What excites me most is [Company]’s belief that every company deserves world-class security — it’s why I’ve spent the last eight years obsessed with selling to the Fortune 500.
I’d love 15 minutes next week to show how I can help you crush that $40M number. Available Tuesday–Thursday after 10am CT.
Best regards,
Sarah Chen
2025 Checklist (250–400 words total)
- Their exact goal/pain in sentence one
- Proof you’ve already solved it
- Hiring manager name + one specific reference
- 2–3 quantified wins that mirror the JD
- One genuine “why this company” line
- Specific availability in the CTA
- Your real voice — no AI perfection
Do this and you go straight from the 400-app pile to the “interview this week” shortlist.